Tuesday, May 6, 2008

Response to Jova's Video

Wonderful video. I liked how the personal stories were spliced between the protest. I also thought that the voices you chose to speak in your film did so very eloquently. The pace, direction and steady revealing of information made your film very interesting to watch. You did a great job in playing to two different audiences, those at Hampshire who were familiar with the situation and those outside of the college who needed to know more about it. My one suggestion would be that the text was really fast and to slow it down.

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