I really enjoyed your video Camilla. I am actually glad your interviews and original idea didn't work out! I thought your piece was a good combination of documentary as well as an art piece. You also did a good job of combining text with the voices in order to relay a story. Although, it would have been nice to maybe hear one or two more specific stories with new voices. I thought the visuals were effective and conveyed a sense of discomfort and nervousness (which I assume many of the girls in the stories felt). Maybe you could have included other images and clips for variety. I also loved the part with the drawing and the erasing of the belly. Good job!
-Sibba
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