Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Sibba's piece

Sibba, you did a really good job in giving to the piece a 'dreamy' feeling and I really liked the general paste of the movie. You had some really good shots and I really liked the part where the girl is taking off the dirt from her hands. I think that Simin's suggestion of having the beginning shot of the girl looking at the book, also in the end, (as a sort of conclusion and beginning-end thread) would have been a good idea. I think that you did a good job in terms of editing and I think that a piece flows well. Good job!
~camilla

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